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  • KenK/84Bravo

    Very complete and concise. I'd bid if I was collecting these.

    Saw your previous pictorial on this pistol. Very nice.

    I believe this will do quite well. Best of luck to you Sir.

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  • Junkballer
    Sounds like a very honest good & bad description IMO...........I like honesty.
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  • MIKE WISKEY
    this is a C&R (03 ffl) pistol so IF your ffl will accept one I'd mention it. I don't know what your ffl charges but shipping is a bit high, usps priority would only be about $25 w/ins.
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  • toad67
    Overall, a nice description. As you requested, a few thoughts. Not sure, but it might make sense to sell the second barrel separately since it's not original to the gun. Someone might be looking for that barrel, but not wanting the gun, and the other way around. I'd also mention if you have an inspection/return policy... GLWS....
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  • dreher
    Sounds like a very complete description.  I can't imagine what you could have left out but I'm sure somebody will find something!!  My nitpicky proof reading did spot an if rather than of in the barrel description but like I said that's me being nitpicky.  Hope you do well with this auction!! 
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  • Rocky Raab
    Spelling nitpicks:
    First paragraph of write up "picture if the inside" should be "picture of".
    Second paragraph of Stimson's comments "The box...being two short" should be "too short".
    Fourth para "The grips...not were they" should be "nor were they".
    Close quote mark needed after the end of Stimson comments as   ...seen better days."
    "...long deceased" should be long-deceased.
    "I myself, am..." no comma needed.

    Overall, pretty good grammatically.
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  • asop
    Rocky-You remind me of my old secretary :D
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  • Rocky Raab
    I hope that's a good thing! Can't help it, though; it's what I did for a long time: English Lit major, writer, editor, and self-admitted Grammar Cop.
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  • Horse Plains Drifter
    Thanks so much for the input everybody! I am taking it to heart. I fixed the spelling/grammar errors. I will list the short barrel separately, as there is a forum member interested in that. The shipping price that I find is way more than MIKE Wiskey lists: Large flat rate box is $21.30, Insurance is $20.00 and change, FFL will be $20.00. May be able to save a bit on insurance, depending on what it sells for. I will check out the C&R for sure. Thanks again for the input.
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